HEKILLZALOT's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Stars Collision]

couldn't they just meet up on one of the steps where they'd be right over/under each other, and she could pass the flower from over the side of the steps?

ik im overthinking this lol

eatslugs responds:

AHAHA drama adds romance!

[Princess Mononoke]

Great lighting & shading.
Anatomy could use some improvements.

cyangorilla responds:

Thank you for the feedback ^^

[Ya dun wound me up!]

masterpiece

ChutneyGlaze responds:

I know right? thank you!

[misa]

Cool.

I don't think the style of lighting/shading matches the black strokes/outlines tho cuz you've got pretty clean linework and the lighting/shading is a little messy. Maybe there just isn't enough shading on the character (especially her shirt/upper body) to emphasize the light shining through the trees.

bubble tea is gross idk thats just me :P

mogy64 responds:

the shading is intentionally messy, but i agree it could be improved upon, wanted to figure out a way to make stuff look sketchier than my usual stuff since i think it ends up more fun. and yeah ur right about having more shading on the upper areas, i was worried that it could be too messy looking so i didnt go with it lol
thanks! i love bubble tea lol

[Fuzzy Dice]

Interesting character concept.

the white strokes/outlines around the hands that are overlapping the demon looking thing's right leg could be thinner, or reposition that leg &/or arms, so that right leg was a little more visible cuz right now it kinda looks like a bunch of broken up lines in that area.

This'd make for a pretty awesome animated character tho. Same goes for most of your other pieces too! Ever try making some stylized environments to go with your characters?

Zals responds:

Thanks for the feedback. This was kinda done on a whim, so it's definitely a bit sloppy, but since people like it a lot I might go and clean this up or redo it. On the topic of environments, I have a lot planned in that department and it's something I'm hoping to show more of in the future.

[Oblio]

cool use of lighting and interesting colour choices.
anatomy could use some improvements, like his left hand and neck.

Ruedefaux responds:

yeah i thought it looked a bit weird, but i wasn't 100% sure. ^^;;

[Full Stop]

Cute.
In terms of anatomy, her toes & hands look a little weird though.

MagtiraPaolo responds:

Yeah in retrospect I can see what you mean. I'll post an edit of this a bit later.

[Dobermanhunter]

Great colour usage, lighting/shading, and overall great character shape.

There could've been a little more details added to the boots and coat, i think, like, seams, stitches, buttons, laces, etc. Maybe a couple whiskers on the face too.
I get that it's a stylized character, but the tail could've had a smoother curve to give it more of a natural aesthetic.

Still a pretty cool looking character!

Dekduee responds:

Thanks for the feedback!

['Game Jam at the Ruins']

cant go but ill be checking out all the games released on NG & GGJ's site

Butzbo responds:

Awesome!, Yeah there's a great variety of games coming from the event, especially experimental ones, it's always fun to explore what comes out.

[Hey Pig]

makes me hungry for a triple dave's from wendy's mmmm

TristanTait responds:

I'll take that as a compliment hahaha